This is a clear response that demonstrates understanding of Jane's search for belonging throughout the novel. Your analysis of how settings reflect her emotional state is effective. To improve, develop your analysis of specific language choices more fully.
Clear structure tracing Jane's journey through different locations
Good use of settings as symbols
Step 1:
Analyse specific quotations more closely - what does 'craving' suggest about the intensity of Jane's desire?
Step 2:
Consider the Victorian context - how does Jane's desire for independence relate to women's position in society?